In Chapter 9 of "Rules for Writers" by Diana Hacker, we learn about making items within a sentence parallel. Using the correct verb at the right time can create the proper balance within a sentence. I think this not only helps to improve grammar, but also helps the writer get the right "flow" to a story or description. Diana Hacker states that a sentence is awkward when it violates the reader's expectations. Repeating function words to clarify parallels will help your sentence structure.
I use parallels in descriptive and comparison type sentences often. When I'm describing how three things are the same and have to name name that description using one adjective, I need to make sure the sentence flows right so the reader can absorb the material without having to reread the sentences. An example would be "I know that the Arctic waters are frigid because seals, sea walruses, and sea lions all have a thick layer of blubber and they all have fur." The sentence uses the parallel of grouping "all" the animals to further support what I know about all of them.
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